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Book Title: Pickley Trouble
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Reader ratings: 6.7
The author of the book: Julie Carroll
Edition: Hollingale Books
Date of issue: 2015
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Language: English
Format files: PDF
The size of the: 4.35 MB

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I read a lot, and I mean A LOT of Children's Pictures Books. If you read my reviews, I am brutally honest, and I give frank my opinions. But they are just my opinions.

I received this book in an email from a co-worker.

This book is a nice try but it feels very self published. It has a very amateur feel with awkward rhymes and weird phrasing that didn't flow well.

The pictures are good but they are very flat (one dimensional). Looks like stuff from a beginning art class. Meaning that the hat is a different in size and perspective on Mr Pickery head on each pictures (actually a lot of that). Just not a lot of space and size consistency. Not sure what 'pickley foo' but I wouldn't want a chair made out of it.

Fish is a plural not singular noun BUT can be used when referring to multi fish species (I don't see multiple species of fish depicted in this book). It also goes from the second phrase last word rhyming each other to 4 lines last word rhyming and then 4 lines last word rhyming, I guess if that is the style you are going for that is fine but it just doesn't flow.

The grubs are very VERY strange Might be fun if they had names--

The story, is fine, but a pickle is more fun to say than cucumber and Dickery Pickery is super fun to say. However one doesn't grow pickles.

I like supporting local authors and appreciate their attempts and creativity - I think it takes a lot of guts to put your blood, sweat and tears out there to be critiqued but it would take a little more polish and work to attract a national publisher.

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